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What is the pros and cons of having a few close friends and having many friends?

작성자: 김*영
2023-01-30 422

회원님의 영작문

Usually, people can be divided into two types when they are making a friend.
One is that they love to make a lot of friends, the other is that they prefer to get to know just a few close friends.

There is no answer but there are the pros and cons.

First of all, there are pros and cons of making a lot of friends.
The pros is we can experience many situations indirectly, when your many friends talk about their own life.
The cons is that it is not easy to share our secret or something which you want to hide to your friends.


Also, there are pros and cons of preferring to make a few close friends.
The pros is that it is easy to talk to their best friend about their innermost feelings.
The cons is that if your only best friend is busy and hard to hang out right now or on your vacation season, you could feel lonely easily. :-(

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Ellen, 
People who have a lot of friends, in particular, may find it challenging to keep up with their responsibilities. Maintaining a group of friends waters down your valuable social resources, making you less able to be a good friend. While a few friends who really appreciate you and have similar personalities will make our life easier. No drama or conflict in our inner circle. Hanging out with fewer people whom we believe is better than having lots of friends yet backstabbing.  ~ Teacher QUENNY
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Usually, people can be divided into two types when they are making a friend.
>> Usually, people can be divided into two types when they are making a friend. (CORRECT) 
One is that they love to make a lot of friends, the other is that they prefer to get to know just a few close friends.
>> One is that they love to make a lot of friends, and the other is that they prefer to get to know just a few close friends.
There is no answer but there are the pros and cons.
>> There is no answer but there are pros and cons.
First of all, there are pros and cons of making a lot of friends.
>>First of all, there are pros and cons of making a lot of friends. (CORECT) 
The pros is we can experience many situations indirectly, when your many friends talk about their own life.
>> The pros are we can learn about many situations indirectly when our many friends talk about their own life experiences. 
The cons is that it is not easy to share our secret or something which you want to hide to your friends.
>>The cons are that it is not easy to share our secrets or something which you want to hide from your friends.
Also, there are pros and cons of preferring to make a few close friends.
>>Also, there are pros and cons of preferring to make a few close friends. (CORRECT) 
The pros is that it is easy to talk to their best friend about their innermost feelings.
>>The pros are that it is easy to talk to their best friend about their innermost feelings.
The cons is that if your only best friend is busy and hard to hang out right now or on your vacation season, you could feel lonely easily. :-(
>> The cons are that if your only best friend is busy and hard to hang out with right now or during your vacation season, you could easily feel lonely.:-(
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Usually, people can be divided into two types when they are making a friend.
One is that they love to make a lot of friends, the other is that they prefer to get to know just a few close friends.

There is no answer but there are the pros and cons.

First of all, there are pros and cons of making a lot of friends.
The pros is we can experience many situations indirectly, when your many friends talk about their own life.
The cons is that it is not easy to share our secret or something which you want to hide to your friends.


Also, there are pros and cons of preferring to make a few close friends.
The pros is that it is easy to talk to their best friend about their innermost feelings.
The cons is that if your only best friend is busy and hard to hang out right now or on your vacation season, you could feel lonely easily. :-(
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