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When I start to learn something to new, I get passions.
For me, it is exciting to learn something to new.
I usually read some books and watch the movie in my spare time.
Also, I like to ride a bike along the Han River.

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Good day, Jenna! Thank you for sharing your hobbies and passions. It's good that your hobbies are good for you. Continue to enjoy what you love doing. Take care and we will talk more about this in class. I will see you.~ T. Lyn
When I start to learn something to new, I get passions.
>>When I start learning something new, I gain enthusiasm.
For me, it is exciting to learn something to new.
>>For me, learning new things is exciting.
I usually read some books and watch the movie in my spare time.
>>I usually read books and watch movies in my free time.
Also, I like to ride a bike along the Han River.
>>Correct. And I like riding my bike along the Han River.
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