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When I read books in English, I always realize my limitation because of vocabulary and Grammar. It isn't easy to read books in English. It is not easy to study only reading but also listening, writing, and speaking. I usually read the Bible in English. It really helped me to grow spiritually and in knowledge. I have a bible study twice a week with my friend. She always encourages me not to give up studying English. Sometimes I am very frustrated with my English skill. Because my English is growing very slowly. However, I can't give up my studying English because of myself and my family. When I am growing up, my family also can grow spiritually and mentally. Over time, this time will remain my testimony. I always try to find meaning for myself when I study English and counseling. And I feel and realize my limitation in studying. Here and now I just do my best. I'm grateful to learn and grow through studying. Thank you, Faith! :)

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It is always a pleasure to study and grow with you, Jane! According to Dr. Seuss, it doesn't matter if you go slowly, as long as you keep going. Moreover, what you do now defines your tomorrow.-Faith-
When I read books in English, I always realize my limitation because of vocabulary and Grammar. 
>> When I read books in English, I always realize my limitation because of vocabulary and grammar.
It isn't easy to read books in English. 
>> CORRECT
OR It is not easy to read books in English. 
It is not easy to study only reading but also listening, writing, and speaking. 
>> It is not easy to study only reading, but also listening, writing, and speaking. 
I usually read the Bible in English. 
>> CORRECT
It really helped me to grow spiritually and in knowledge. 
>> It really helps me grow spiritually and in knowledge. 
I have a bible study twice a week with my friend. 
>> I have a Bible study twice a week with my friend. 
She always encourages me not to give up studying English. 
>> CORRECT
Sometimes I am very frustrated with my English skill. Because my English is growing very slowly. 
>> Sometimes I am very frustrated with my English skills because it is growing very slowly. 
However, I can't give up my studying English because of myself and my family. 
>> However, I cannot give up my English study because of myself and my family. 
When I am growing up, my family also can grow spiritually and mentally. 
>> If I grow, my family also can grow spiritually and mentally. 
Over time, this time will remain my testimony. 
>> Overtime, this time will remain my testimony. 
OR Someday, this period will become my testimony.
always try to find meaning for myself when I study English and counseling. 
>> CORRECT
And I feel and realize my limitation in studying. 
>> In addition, I feel and realize my limitation in studying. 
Here and now I just do my best. 
>> CORRECT
I'm grateful to learn and grow through studying. 
>> CORRECT
OR I am grateful to learn and grow through studying. 
Thank you, Faith! :)
>> CORRECT
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