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Hello, T. Donna.
How was your Friday?
As we expected, I met foreigners who spoke English both yesterday and today.
One man is Asian, and I think he's from India or something.
He spoke English fluently, but his pronunciation was not good.
The other man's skin was black and his pronunciation was very clear.
I think he's from Africa.
English speaking is getting more and more interesting.
I sometimes talked to foreigners for a long time even if our clinic was too busy.
Maybe our staff don't like this, though.
Meanwhile, Dr. MJ and I visited other clinic to learn about brandnew lifting device and sleep anesthesia.
That was a great time.
We will apply these procedures after about one month when we are moving.
After that, we ate several delivery foods with So-ju.
As we ate the food, we tried to encourage each other with some good advices.
To enhance my memory, I usually repeat saying the important things, and try to conceive it to the drawing in my mind.
What about you?
Have a good weekend.

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Happy Saturday, Dr. Kim!

My Friday was pretty good. My Saturday is packed with activities. This morning, I went to the radio, emceed a wedding and christening in the afternoon, and meeting my bestfriend in the evening. As I check your homework, I'm still waiting for the time to leave and see my bestfriend. Anyway, it's going to be a good night.

Well, your clinic is getting more interesting with more foreign patients coming in. Maybe, they hear from their other friends that the doctor (you) speaks fluent English and the service is excellent. Don't you think so? This means that you are on the right track in attracting more and more international and local patients alike. Way to go! Tell me more about these encounters in class.

Meanwhile, innovations in terms of the new device as well as the anesthesia are very good additions to your existing  medical supplies. Good conversations over a hearty meal is well-deserved by you and Dr. M.J.

Now, to reinforce our memory, we have different techniques. However, writing things down as well as associating ideas to familiar and meaningful experiences are the best for me. I am just so bad at memorizing most of the time. A script or a written material would be good to remember.

So, please read the suggestions in your other sentences below. As usual, you got so many correct sentences so, excellent job for always putting all your thoughts in your daily journal all the time. Your time, effort, and skills are very highly appreciated.

See you in class next week. Enjoy your weekend!

-T. Donna

Hello, T. Donna.
>> Correct!

How was your Friday?
>> Correct!

As we expected, I met foreigners who spoke English both yesterday and today.
>> As I expected, I met foreigners who spoke English both yesterday and today.

One man is Asian, and I think he's from India or something.
>> Correct!

He spoke English fluently, but his pronunciation was not good.
>> Correct!

The other man's skin was black and his pronunciation was very clear.
>> Correct!

I think he's from Africa.
>> Correct!

English speaking is getting more and more interesting.
>> Correct!

I sometimes talked to foreigners for a long time even if our clinic was too busy.
>> Correct!

Maybe our staff don't like this, though.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile, Dr. MJ and I visited other clinic to learn about brandnew lifting device and sleep anesthesia.
>> 
Meanwhile, Dr. MJ and I visited another clinic to learn about a brand new lifting device and a sleep anesthesia.

That was a great time.
>> Correct!

We will apply these procedures after about one month when we are moving.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

After that, we ate several delivery foods with So-ju.
>> Correct!

As we ate the food, we tried to encourage each other with some good advices.
>> As we ate the food, we tried to encourage each other with some good pieces of advice.

To enhance my memory, I usually repeat saying the important things, and try to conceive it to the drawing in my mind.
>> To enhance my memory, I usually repeat saying the important things, and try to conceive them in my mind.

What about you?
>> Correct!

Have a good weekend.
>> Correct!
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