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How can you overcome stage fright?

작성자: 류*선
2023-01-27 733

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I have stage fright. I don't have my own special solution that can overcome stage fright. Before I am stage, I practice my tasks many times by myself and I pray every moment to the holy spirit that is with me. These days I practice reading the Bible and some prayers for worship as a liturgist. I have never experienced that in English before. I am very nervous. Before I decided to be a liturgist, I hesitated for a long time. because I didn't have the confidence that read the Bible in English in front of people. Nevertheless, the reason that I became a liturgist led me, because can grow spiritually. I often imagine that I preach a sermon and conversate with people fluently in English. When I imagine them, I feel very excited. but the reality is followed by stress and struggle. Also, I am considering how to deal with my stress emotionally and spiritually. every moment I ask the holy spirit what should I do through studying counseling and prayer. Thanks, Faith! ^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

You are brave, Jane! I always believe that to overcome fear, you need to face it. Break a leg!-Faith-
I have stage fright. 
>> CORRECT
I don't have my own special solution that can overcome stage fright. 
>> CORRECT
OR I do not have my own special solution that can overcome stage fright. 
Before I am stage, I practice my tasks many times by myself and I pray every moment to the holy spirit that is with me. 
>> Before I go on stage, I practice my tasks many times by myself and I pray every moment to the Holy Spirit to be with me. 
These days I practice reading the Bible and some prayers for worship as a liturgist. 
>> These days, I practice reading the Bible and some prayers for worship as a liturgist. 
I have never experienced that in English before. 
>> CORRECT
I am very nervous. 
>> CORRECT
OR I am agitated.
Before I decided to be a liturgist, I hesitated for a long time. because I didn't have the confidence that read the Bible in English in front of people. 
>> Before I decided to be a liturgist, I hesitated for a long time because I did not have the confidence to read the Bible in English in front of people. 
Nevertheless, the reason that I became a liturgist led me, because can grow spiritually. 
>> Nevertheless, the reason that I became a liturgist is that I can grow spiritually. 
I often imagine that I preach a sermon and conversate with people fluently in English. 
>> CORRECT
When I imagine them, I feel very excited. but the reality is followed by stress and struggle. 
>> When I imagine them, I feel very excited, but the reality is followed by stress and struggle. 
Also, I am considering how to deal with my stress emotionally and spiritually. every moment I ask the holy spirit what should I do through studying counseling and prayer. 
>> Also, I am considering how to deal with my stress emotionally and spiritually every moment I ask the Holy Spirit what I should do through studying, counseling and prayer. 
Thanks, Faith! ^^
>> CORRECT
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