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Homework from the Feedback (4)

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Q1. Which gadgets seem to be the best? How about the worst?

A1. The stove can be either the best one (because it's so useful) or the worst one (because it's dangerous) .

Q2. What are the gadgets that you really want to get?

A2. I don't have any gadgets that I don't have but I want to get.

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Hi Geonha, 
A stove is not a gadget it's cooking equipment.  A gadget is a small machine or device which does something useful. For example computers, laptops and others. Some of the gadgets we cannot even imagine without being them are Laptops, smartphones, microwaves, smartwatches, etc. The use of devices has solved lots of problems with physically challenged people. It has influenced us in many ways, and we can't even think without gadgets in our daily lives. ~ Teacher QUENNY..


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Q1. Which gadgets seem to be the best? How about the worst?
>> Which gadgets seem to be the best? How about the worst? (CORRECT) 
A1. The stove can be either the best one (because it's so useful) or the worst one (because it's dangerous) .
>> The stove can be either the best one because it's so useful or the worst one because it's dangerous. 
Q2. What are the gadgets that you really want to get?
>> What are the gadgets that you really want to get? (CORRECT) 
A2. I don't have any gadgets that I don't have but I want to get.
>> There's no gadget that I want to get. 
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Q1. Which gadgets seem to be the best? How about the worst?

A1. The stove can be either the best one (because it's so useful) or the worst one (because it's dangerous) .

Q2. What are the gadgets that you really want to get?

A2. I don't have any gadgets that I don't have but I want to get.
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