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Answer : What is your favorite Seollal Holiday memory?

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There is no exactly my favorite Seollal Holiday. but when my age was under 20th, at every year, Seollal Holiday was the best holiday in all holidays. because we do special greeting in my country. once we did the greeting, My parents gave our a lot of money. In Seollal, my parents gave our more money than usual.

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Thank you for sharing this with me, Steven. ^_^ I did hear from some people that kids really enjoy the holiday because of the money they receive kkk. :D 
~T.Harmony <3

There is no exactly my favorite Seollal Holiday. 
>> I don't exactly have a favorite Seollal Holiday memory.
but when my age was under 20th, at every year, Seollal Holiday was the best holiday in all holidays.
>> But when I was below 20 years old, every year, Seollal Holiday was the best holiday in all holidays.
because we do special greeting in my country. 
>> Because we do a special greeting in my country.
once we did the greeting, My parents gave our a lot of money. 
>> After we did the greeting, my parents gave us a lot of money.
In Seollal, my parents gave our more money than usual.
>> During Seollal, my parents gave us more money than usual.
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