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In korea, family gathering is important. On luna year and Korean Thanksgiving Day, all family come to oldest person's house. That's tradition. When we meet on luna year, we do "sebae". It is a bow that we usually do on new year to older people. And then, doler people give some pocket money to younger people. Someday, I should give pocket money to my cousin. Then, maybe I feel proud.

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Hello, Seon U!
Thanks for sharing your experience. :)
Family gatherings are always enjoyable to attend. 
Me too, I would like to receive pocket money! Haha! Kidding aside. :D
Anyway, see you next week~
-T.Jhozel 

In korea, family gathering is important. 
>>  In Korea, family gathering is important. 
On luna year and Korean Thanksgiving Day, all family come to oldest person's house.
>> On Lunar New Year and Korean Thanksgiving Day, the entire family gathers at the home of the oldest person.
That's tradition. When we meet on luna year, we do "sebae". 
>> That's tradition. When we meet on Lunar Year, we do "sebae". 
It is a bow that we usually do on new year to older people. And then, doler people give some pocket money to younger people. 
>> It is a tradition to bow on new year to elderly people. Then older people give younger people pocket money. 
Someday, I should give pocket money to my cousin. 
>>  Correct!
Then, maybe I feel proud. 
>> Then, maybe I'll feel proud. 
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