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A financial problem.

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I have ever lent my money to my friend.
Everytime they didn't try to return my money.
So I had to tell them to give it back.
I am not comfortable this situation.
I think If you keep your friendship
you had not lent some money .

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Good day, Suzan!
I agree with you that  if you want to keep your friends, do not let money be involved. However in emergency situations, you will know who your friends are, especially on financial matters. I  guess it depends on the case.
I hope you will have a good judgment on this. 
take care!
Aki~
I have ever lent my money to my friend.
>>> I have never lent my money to my friend.
Everytime they didn't try to return my money.
>>> Because they didn't try to return my money.
So I had to tell them to give it back.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>> So I have to remind them to give it back.
I am not comfortable this situation.
>>> I am not comfortable this situation.
I think If you keep your friendship you had not lent some money .
>>> I think if you want to keep your friendship, you must not lend your money to a friend.
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