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What is the most valuable lesson that we can learn from children?

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It is creativity and purity. It's because adults don't have them they just have critical thinking about some heavy subjects. And their habits are criticize anything. But children are always make their own creativity. And their purity is make the world brightly. Teenagers are very same with adults. They are change slowly. So they need to get lesson from children about it and me too.

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Hi, Daisy. ^_^
I agree that we have so much to learn from children. It's true that they are creative and innocent. They say, if you want to learn the truth, ask a child because a child will never lie. That's how pure they are. 
Anyhow, I hope you're having a great day. 
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

It is creativity and purity. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because adults don't have them they just have critical thinking about some heavy subjects. 
>> It's because adults don't have them. They just have critical thinking about some heavy subjects. 
And their habits are criticize anything. 
>> In addition, they have the habit of criticizing anything.
But children are always make their own creativity. 
>> But children always find a way to show their creativity. 
And their purity is make the world brightly. 
>> Their purity also makes the world a brighter place. 
Teenagers are very same with adults. 
>> Teenagers are very much the same with adults. 
They are change slowly. 
>> They change slowly. 
So they need to get lesson from children about it and me too.
>> So they need to get lessons from children about it. I also need to learn from them too.
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