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Q: Are exams useful or just a waste of time? Explain your answer.
A: I think exams are useful.
I think they're useful because exams can show the level of a person's skill or other things.
Also, if a person gets high score in the exam, then the person can get motivated.
And if the person gets low score, then the person will try to get higher score next time.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think exams are useful.

>> CORRECT!
I think they're useful because exams can show the level of a person's skill or other things.

>> CORRECT!
Also, if a person gets high score in the exam, then the person can get motivated.

>> Also, if a person gets a high score in the exam, then the person will be motivated.
And if the person gets low score, then the person will try to get higher score next time.

>> If the person gets a low score, then the person will try to get a higher score next time.

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