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What makes you feel happy?

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The money makes me happy.
Because we live in a capitalism.
Actually, it isn't a only way to make us happy.
However, a money is very powerful for our life.

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Hi JT!

Money is obviously not the sole base of happiness, but it surely is one of the most important bases. Money can help afford necessities. People with higher incomes were generally more satisfied with their lives.

~Kelly^^

The money makes me happy.
>> Money makes me happy.
Because we live in a capitalism.
>> Because we live in capitalism.
Actually, it isn't a only way to make us happy.
>> Actually, it isn't the only way to make us happy.
However, a money is very powerful for our life.
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