¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework from the Feedback (2)

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹Ú*ÇÏ
2023-01-20 924

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Q1. What sports do you like?

A1. I like boxing and basketball.

Q2. What sport do you want to try?

A2. There's no sport that I want to try.

Q3. What sports do most people in your country enjoy?

A3. The sport that most people in my country enjoy is baseball.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Geonha, 
Engaging in physical activities like sports improves your heart function. It helps to make your body more flexible and responsive. Moreover, sports help to improve brain activity as well, making it the best way to avoid numerous possible aging illnesses. Furthermore, it also brings positive energy, discipline, and other commendable qualities to your life. ~ Teacher QUENNY
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Q1. What sports do you like?
>> What sports do you like?(CORRECT) 
A1. I like boxing and basketball.
>>  I like boxing and basketball. (CORRECT) 
Q2. What sport do you want to try?
>> What sport do you want to try?(CORRECT) 
A2. There's no sport that I want to try.
>>  There's no sport that I want to try.(CORRECT) 
Q3. What sports do most people in your country enjoy?
>> What sports do most people in your country enjoy?(CORRECT) 
A3. The sport that most people in my country enjoy is baseball.
>>  The sport that most people in my country enjoy is baseball.(CORRECT) 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Q1. What sports do you like?

A1. I like boxing and basketball.

Q2. What sport do you want to try?

A2. There's no sport that I want to try.

Q3. What sports do most people in your country enjoy?

A3. The sport that most people in my country enjoy is baseball.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
130824 Do you consider yourself a good artist? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 0
130823 What is a unique talent you have? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1655
130822 If you wrote a letter to your government, what would you write... ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 2
130821 Is it sometimes okay to give things up? ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1966
130820 Are there any superstitions or beliefs in your country related... ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1
130819 According to a survey, over half of the Korean population has... ±è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1762
130818 What three (3) adjectives would you use to describe your... ±è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1786
130817 HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \"The happiest... ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1
130816 Homework- What did you do last weekend? ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 2634
130815 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1791
130814 HOMEWORK FOR THE STUDENT: Do you like having a family gathering? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 5
130813 What are the disadvantages of living in a bustling city? ¹Ú*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1613
130812 HOMEWORK FOR THE STUDENT: What have you lost while traveling? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1
130811 homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1353
130810 Do you love your neighborhood? Please explain your answer ¹Ú*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1700
130809 HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Do you stay in touch with all of the... ¼­*ÅÃ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 1987
130808 Homework JA*UNG CHUNG ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 2200
130807 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 2160
130806 WRITING TASK: What is your biggest dream? ÀÓ*Áö ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 7
130805 ESSAY ±Ç*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-09-06 4

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04