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Why are many people afraid of insects?

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Because insects are gross. They may also be toxic. Also, there are many insects that help us, but there are more insects that don't. And cockroaches harm our lives. This is why I hate insects.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

Because insects are gross. 
>>> CORRECT!

They may also be toxic. 
>>> CORRECT!

Also, there are many insects that help us, but there are more insects that don't. 
>>> CORRECT!

And cockroaches harm our lives. 
>>> CORRECT!

This is why I hate insects.
>>> CORRECT!
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