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What do you think is the worst crime a person could commit?
I think the worst crime is violence to hurt people or animals and when it comes to murdering.

What are the things we could do to protect ourselves from crime?
We can avoid talking to strangers who seems to be asking easily for the money.
When we're out, returning back home before it gets dark at night, trying to stay in a safe places at all times could be helpful at least.

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Hi Helen, 
Crime in South Korea is one of the lowest in the world. Petty theft, like pickpocketing, is the most prevalent tourist crime in South Korea. The most frequently used type of punishment in South Korea is a fine followed by imprisonment and penal servitude. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)

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What do you think is the worst crime a person could commit?
>> What do you think is the worst crime a person could commit? (CORRECT) 
I think the worst crime is violence to hurt people or animals and when it comes to murdering.
>> I think the worst crime is violence and hurting people or animals which can result in murder. 
What are the things we could do to protect ourselves from crime?
>> What are the things we could do to protect ourselves from crime? (CORRECT) 
We can avoid talking to strangers who seems to be asking easily for the money.
>>  We can avoid talking to strangers who seem to be asking easily for money.
When we're out, returning back home before it gets dark at night, trying to stay in a safe places at all times could be helpful at least.
>> When we're out, returning back home before it gets dark at night, trying to stay in safe places at all times could be helpful at least.
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What do you think is the worst crime a person could commit?
I think the worst crime is violence to hurt people or animals and when it comes to murdering.

What are the things we could do to protect ourselves from crime?
We can avoid talking to strangers who seems to be asking easily for the money.
When we're out, returning back home before it gets dark at night, trying to stay in a safe places at all times could be helpful at least.
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