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Homework

작성자: 김*우
2023-01-17 484

회원님의 영작문

Hello, T.Donna.
Today, many things happened.
The nursery department manager quitted our clinic after the morning conference.
That's because Dr. MJ asked her if she really want to leave our clinic and then she told him in front of me and other managers that it was right.
After her reply, Dr. MJ said "Okay, you can't join a manager's meeting and education from now on."
After a while, she reported a paper of resignation.
In the morning worktime, I could find a memo of some patient's chart about language.
'Korean X' means he or she can't speak Korean.
When I find that memo, I always expect a foreigner who can speaks English.
But, today was not bingo.
He couldn't speak English as well.
We talked to each other with facial movements and gestures.
At lunch, Dr. MJ and I were very hungry, so we ordered the food for 6 people.
We have big stomachs, I suppose. (This is not a Doctor's word.)
Anyway, I have no idea about my homework.
If I have enough time, I want to learn about histories.
See you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Dr. Kim!

Nowadays, being frank can be so useful because time is so limited and we canno afford to keep people at work who do not want to stay and work together harmoniously. I understand Dr. M.J. and his actions. It's harsh but it's needed for a fast-growing company just like yours. Do not worry, good members will join you soon. 

Well, it is interesting to learn about the non-Korean and non-English patient that you had. You must learn sign language now as well. ^^ Anyway, I am sure you performed the treatment well. I am curious about interesting procedures you perform. I hope you can also share these in class. 

Doctors deserve a very good meal all the time. So, never feel guilty about a good meal. Just enjoy eating what you want because you work so hard. Meanwhile, learning something new and useful matters a lot. It fules the mind and makes us more confident when we atlk to other people.

Below, the common grammar comments I made were about proper diction, tense of verb, subject-verb agreement, among others. Kindly take time to go over them.

Have a productive and a happy Wednesday!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

Today, many things happened.
>> Correct!

The nursery department manager quitted our clinic after the morning conference.
>> The nursery department manager quit our clinic after the morning conference.

That's because Dr. MJ asked her if she really want to leave our clinic and then she told him in front of me and other managers that it was right.
>> That's because Dr. MJ asked her if she really wants to leave our clinic and then she told him in front of me and other managers that it was right.

After her reply, Dr. MJ said "Okay, you can't join a manager's meeting and education from now on."
>> After her reply, Dr. MJ said "Okay, you can't join the manager's meeting and education from now on."

After a while, she reported a paper of resignation.
>> After a while, she (submitted/ filed) a paper of resignation.

In the morning worktime, I could find a memo of some patient's chart about language.
>> Correct!
Or: In the morning worktime, I found a memo of some patient's chart about language.

'Korean X' means he or she can't speak Korean.
>> Correct!

When I find that memo, I always expect a foreigner who can speaks English.
>> When I find that memo, I always expect a foreigner who can speak English.

But, today was not bingo.
>> But, today was not a bingo.

He couldn't speak English as well.
>> Correct!

We talked to each other with facial movements and gestures.
>> Correct!

At lunch, Dr. MJ and I were very hungry, so we ordered the food for 6 people.
>> Correct!

We have big stomachs, I suppose. (This is not a Doctor's word.)
>> Correct!

Anyway, I have no idea about my homework.
>> Correct!

If I have enough time, I want to learn about histories.
>> If I have enough time, I want to learn about history.

See you.
>> Correct!
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