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Our family have own time on weekend. Our family usually do the things which we couldn't do on weekday or we want. and most of us are not outgoing people so we rarely go out and drive freely if we don't have things to do. But dinner time, we talk and look back up and advise freely about our this week. And i sometimes watch movie and sleep early for better next week.

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Good morning, Stella ^^
Thank you for writing your homework! 
See you later!
-T.Jhozel

Our family have own time on weekend. 
>> On the weekends, our family has free time.
Our family usually do the things which we couldn't do on weekday or we want. 
>> Usually, our family does things that we either want to do or couldn't do during the workweek.
and most of us are not outgoing people so we rarely go out and drive freely if we don't have things to do. 
>> And because most of us are not outgoing, we rarely go out and drive freely if we don't have something else to do.
But dinner time, we talk and look back up and advise freely about our this week. 
>>  But at dinnertime, we talk and look back up, freely advising each other about our week.
And i sometimes watch movie and sleep early for better next week.
>>Sometimes, I watch a movie and go to bed early in preparation for a better week.
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