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Q: What¡¯s the best picture you have ever seen?
A: The best picture I've ever seen was the picture which contains the view of Mt. Everest.
It's very hard to go there, and I'm not even going to go there, so I think the picture with Mt. Everest is the best picture.
Also, I like the pictures with the view of great nature.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


The best picture I've ever seen was the picture which contains the view of Mt. Everest.

>> The best picture I've ever seen was the picture with the view of Mt. Everest.
It's very hard to go there, and I'm not even going to go there, so I think the picture with Mt. Everest is the best picture.

>> It's very hard to go there and I'm not even going to go there, so I think the picture with Mt. Everest is the best picture.
Also, I like the pictures with the view of great nature.

>> CORRECT!

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