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Diary20230109

작성자: 조*혜
2023-01-09 956

회원님의 영작문

About what I did during the last weekends

I have some of action cameras, like Gopro and Insta360 since a few years ago, (bought Insta360 last year.) Some of my friends tried to stop me from buying those cameras because it's not just a photo camera but filming camera, so I need to spend a lot of time to learn how to use editing programs. And it's going to be really hassle and eventually I'll give up filming video wasting money. :D haha.
There are so many raw videos I have taken so far but not edited, so yesterday I just thought I needed to learn editing program at last.
I have known some basic tools from the program, like how to cut the film and put together. I have to learn more about putting some animation function to make the video look more fancy. I checked that there are so many free lesson in Youtube about editing programs, and spent whole weekends for learning one of the easiest programs. And also register zoom lesson for tonight.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey, Min. You did a great job with the homework. Thank you and I appreciate you taking the time and effort to do the homework. I hope you are having a good week. I'll see you soon. ~Jane c",) 


I have some of action cameras, like Gopro and Insta360 since a few years ago, (bought Insta360 last year.) 
>> I have had some action cameras like GoPro and Insta360 for a few years now but I bought Insta360 last year. 

Some of my friends tried to stop me from buying those cameras because it's not just a photo camera but filming camera, so I need to spend a lot of time to learn how to use editing programs. 
>> Some of my friends tried to stop me from buying those cameras because they're not just photo cameras but filming cameras, so I need to spend a lot of time learning how to use editing programs. 

And it's going to be really hassle and eventually I'll give up filming video wasting money. :D haha.
>> And it's going to be a real hassle and eventually, I'll give up filming videos and I'll be wasting money. 

There are so many raw videos I have taken so far but not edited, so yesterday I just thought I needed to learn editing program at last.
>> There are so many raw videos I have taken so far but not edited, so yesterday I just thought I needed to learn an editing program at last.

I have known some basic tools from the program, like how to cut the film and put together. 
>> I have known some basic tools from the program, like how to cut the film and put it together. 

I have to learn more about putting some animation function to make the video look more fancy. 
>> I have to learn more about putting some animation functions to make the video look fancier. 

I checked that there are so many free lesson in Youtube about editing programs, and spent whole weekends for learning one of the easiest programs. 
>> I checked and there are so many free lessons on Youtube about editing programs and spent whole weekends learning one of the easiest programs. 

And also register zoom lesson for tonight.
>> I also registered for a zoom lesson tonight. 

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