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I haven't dreamed so much during sleep.
Although I have a dream, most of time I don't remember what I dream of after I wake up.
Many people appear in my dream including co-workers, friends and my family.
I think they are usually related to my previous experiences.
Sometimes, when I have some problems and worries, then they used to show up in my dream.
Also, there are many cases that situations which I put into during my dream don't make sense.
I remember a good dream which I had when I was a middle school student.
At that time, I liked an idol group very much, and I wanted to see them even in a dream.
Luckily, I met them in my dream, and I enjoyed playing games wuth them.
After I woke up, I realized that it was a dream and I was a little disappointed, but it was a happy dream.

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Good afternoon, Dr. Stella!

I guess, more often than not, you are exhausted from work, so you sleep soundly like a baby. ^^ Anyway, dreams have been studied and analyzes for centuries but there is not one exact scientific evidence or truth of why we dream. Some scholar say it is an extension of our daily activites while others say that the mind needs to be busy even when we sleep. For me, I dream when my room is higher in temperature or my body heats up de to sleep. Either way, in our lives, we all have experienced dreaming.

Thus, your acoounts of experiences below are very similar to the researches and analysis of dreams in the pat. My grammar suggestions were underscored, please read them carefully. Congratulations on your correct sentences!

See you in class.

-T. Donna~

I haven't dreamed so much during sleep.
>> Correct!

Although I have a dream, most of time I don't remember what I dream of after I wake up.
>> Although I have a dream, most of the time, I don't remember what I dreamt of after I wake up.

Many people appear in my dream including co-workers, friends and my family.
>> Correct!
Or: Many people appear in my dream including co-workers, friends, and my family.

I think they are usually related to my previous experiences.
>> Correct!

Sometimes, when I have some problems and worries, then they used to show up in my dream.
>>Sometimes, when I have some problems and worries, they tend to show up in my dream.

Also, there are many cases that situations which I put into during my dream don't make sense.
>> Also, there are many cases that situations which I put myself into during my dream don't make sense.

I remember a good dream which I had when I was a middle school student.
>> Correct!

At that time, I liked an idol group very much, and I wanted to see them even in a dream.
>> Correct!

Luckily, I met them in my dream, and I enjoyed playing games wuth them.
>> Correct!
Or: with

After I woke up, I realized that it was a dream and I was a little disappointed, but it was a happy dream.
>>  After I woke up, I realize that it was a dream and I was a little disappointed, but it was a happy dream.
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