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What is the biggest change most people experience in their lives? Why?

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I think most people experience their physical appearance, mental and form of their life. It\'s because their body and thinking is change from growing up to suit their own age. And their form of life is change by when they were children, teenager, student of university, merry with lover and raise their child. Maybe many people feel the change of this three things in their lives.

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Good afternoon Daisy. ^^
It's Monday again. Thank you for sharing your opinion regarding this matter. I think we continuously change as we mature. 
I hope you're having a great day at school. 
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

I think most people experience their physical appearance, mental and form of their life. 
>> [Do you mean]: I think most people experience changes with their physical appearance and perspective or outlook in their lives. 
It\'s because their body and thinking is change from growing up to suit their own age. 
>> It's because their bodies and way of thinking change as they grow older to keep up with their ages. 
And their form of life is change by when they were children, teenager, student of university, merry with lover and raise their child. 
>> In addition, their way of living changes as compared to when they were children, teenagers, university students, married people and even after they start having kids. 
Maybe many people feel the change of this three things in their lives.
>> Maybe many people feel the change of these three things in their lives.
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