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What is something you have accomplished as an adult that your younger self would be proud of?

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Well, the thing that I can feel proud of myself as my younger is to become a mechanic of airplane, Even thought it's a small airline. When I was little, I didn't have no idea what I will get a job. Also, I didn't make effort anything else. So I can feel that. :)

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Well, the thing that I can feel proud of myself as my younger is to become a mechanic of airplane,  Even thought it's a small airline.
>> Well, the thing that my younger self would be proud of is if I become an aircraft mechanic even if it's just a small airplane.
When I was little, I didn't have no idea what I will get a job.
>> When I was little, I didn't have any idea of my future.
Also, I didn't make effort anything else.
>> I didn't not make so much effort for that.


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