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How to make your favorite drink

작성자: 김*율
2023-01-06 1020

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Anyone has a favorite drink. Mine is tropical mango juice. But I'll tell you one of my magical recipes. It is sparkling full-moonbeam star ade. First you need a full moon. You have to smoothe out the wrinkles in your finest bag, and then meditate 1 minute before you catch the full moon beam. After your bag is full of invisible moonbeam, you might feel it shining through your heart. Then, seal it tight and put it in a glass case. Now you need 7 stars. If you catch a star, they immediately turn invisible and you have to count the stars you want to catch. Then, put those in the same glass case you put the moonbeams in. Does it sparkle faintly? If not, you just need to put 2 or 3 more stars in. Then it will surely sparkle. Now, get some fresh honey and clean water. Put the ingredients in your finest glass cup and stirr it with your finest spoon and pure heart, plus closing your eyes. After you stirred, say a good word and meditate 1 minute before you drink. It will taste like cotton candy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Heather! Thank you for sharing the story of how to make your favorite drink. Let's try making it soon, if it is possible. I will see you in class!~ T. Lyn
Anyone has a favorite drink. 
>>Everyone has their favorite drink.
Mine is tropical mango juice. 
>>My favorite drink is mango juice.
But I'll tell you one of my magical recipes. 
>>But I'll tell you one of the magic reicpes.
It is sparkling full-moonbeam star ade. 
>>It is the twinkling full moonbeam star-ade.
First you need a full moon. 
>>First, we need a full moon.
You have to smoothe out the wrinkles in your finest bag, and then meditate 1 minute before you catch the full moon beam. 
>>You should smooth out the wrinkles on your finest bag and meditate for one minute before the full moon rises.
After your bag is full of invisible moonbeam, you might feel it shining through your heart. 
>>When your bag is filled with invisible moonlight, you can feel it illuminating your heart. 
Then, seal it tight and put it in a glass case. 
>>It is then tightly sealed and placed in a glass case.
Now you need 7 stars. 
>>Correct.
If you catch a star, they immediately turn invisible and you have to count the stars you want to catch. 
>>When you catch a star, it instantly becomes invisible, and you have to count the stars you want to catch.
Then, put those in the same glass case you put the moonbeams in. 
>>Then put the them in a glass case with moonshine
Does it sparkle faintly? 
>>Correct.
If not, you just need to put 2 or 3 more stars in. 
>>If not, just add two to three stars.
Then it will surely sparkle. 
>>Correct.
Now, get some fresh honey and clean water. 
>>Correct.
Put the ingredients in your finest glass cup and stirr it with your finest spoon and pure heart, plus closing your eyes.
>>Put the ingredients in the finest glass, close your eyes, stir with the finest spoon and pure heart.
After you stirred, say a good word and meditate 1 minute before you drink. 
>>After stirring, say a good word and meditate for one minute before drinking.
It will taste like cotton candy.
>>Correct.
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