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Absolutely at home. Especially, when I'm down on my bed with watching a Netflix. These days, I don't like to go outside my place for the winter season. Not only I can get a cold easily, but also I really hate cold weather. :)

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Hello Elic! I hope you're doing ok right now. Thank you for participating actively in my class today. You did well! You were able to converse with me with minimal corrections. Keep up the good work! ^^ Each day comes with the opportunity to be the best in your area of strength. If you can think it, you can achieve it! :) 

Especially, when I'm down on my bed with watching a Netflix.
>> Especially when I'm lying down on my bed while watching Netflix.
These days, I don't like to go outside my place for the winter season.
>> These days, I don't like to go out because of the winter season.
Not only I can get a cold easily, but also I really hate cold weather. :)
>> Because I can get a cold easily and also I really hate cold weather. :)
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