¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

1/4 homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: À±*Çö
2023-01-05 433

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

There are several situations to negotiate with other people.
It's important to have good negotiation skills if we want to gain best results from the negotiation.
I think it's not good to strongly insist on my benefits.
It's desirable to listen to other people's opinion carefully and I should know how to discard my minor interests for big advantages.
I also have chances to compromise something.
Simply when I go to traditional market to buy vegetables and fruits, I often negotiate on the product's price.
In case that our team should buy some products within a limited budget and all team members want to buy different items, then we make a decision which product is priority to buy.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good day. Dr. Stella!

In class today, we have emphasized the importance of negotiation skills to upscale our happiness and success. True to what you have mentioned below, it is sometimes giving up some tiny or irrrelevant things to give way to greater interests.

Anyway, the structure and meaning of this composition displays excellence in all aspects of grammar, ideas, logical results and discussion, as well as accurate examples. Congratulations for doing an outstanding job! I have deleted 'a' twice in the last two sentences for the grammar suggestion.

See you again soon!

-T. Donna~

There are several situations to negotiate with other people.
>> Correct!

It's important to have good negotiation skills if we want to gain best results from the negotiation.
>> Correct!

I think it's not good to strongly insist on my benefits.
>> Correct!

It's desirable to listen to other people's opinion carefully and I should know how to discard my minor interests for big advantages.
>> Correct!

I also have chances to compromise something.
>> Correct!

Simply when I go to traditional market to buy vegetables and fruits, I often negotiate on the product's price.
>> Simply when I go to the traditional market to buy vegetables and fruits, I often negotiate on the product's price.

In case that our team should buy some products within a limited budget and all team members want to buy different items, then we make a decision which product is priority to buy.
>>   In case that our team should buy some products within a limited budget and all team members want to buy different items, then we make a decision which product is a priority to buy.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
125183 Tech ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 522
125182 homework1 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 3
125181 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 592
125180 Homework ¹æ*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 3
125179 Please try to find top three things that can overcome your stage... ·ù*¼± ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 748
125178 homework ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 398
125177 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 2
125176 homework ä*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 464
125175 homework ä*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 566
125174 What is your opinion about a four-day week? ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 1993
125173 IELTS book1 45p - Question5 ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 2
125172 Organization ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 0
125171 Answer : What do you think will the future look like 10 years... Á¤*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 729
125170 homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 0
125169 Homework Àå*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 1
125168 Monday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 730
125167 Controlled CVD Growth of Highly ⟨111⟩-Oriented... Àå*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 631
125166 Controlled CVD Growth of Highly ⟨111⟩-Oriented... Àå*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 1149
125165 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 0
125164 Women should go to military. ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-30 2162

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04