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If you were an item of clothing, what would you be and why?

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I'm going to be jeans. Because jeans have been worn by many people for a long time. It has been worn for a long time, but it is still enjoyed by many people. So jeans have become essential clothes for people. Jeans are pretty. It's also comfortable. It also goes well with many clothes. It is also convenient to store. I don't think I'll throw it away if I wear jeans. And jeans are cheap.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I'm going to be jeans. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because jeans have been worn by many people for a long time. 
>>> CORRECT!

It has been worn for a long time, but it is still enjoyed by many people. So jeans have become essential clothes for people. 
>>> CORRECT!

Jeans are pretty. 
>>> CORRECT!

It's also comfortable. It also goes well with many clothes. 
>>> CORRECT!

It is also convenient to store. I don't think I'll throw it away if I wear jeans. 
>>> CORRECT!

And jeans are cheap.
>>> And the jeans are cheap.

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