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I think that teachers should have reasonable rights and authority for teaching.

Of course we must not overlook the abuse and violence to the children.

When teacher's authority collapse in the class, students do not respect any more in education.

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Great day, Ms. Lily!
Thank you once again for sharing our thought about teachers' rights and authority. These days, there is unfair justice between parents and teachers. As a parent and a teacher, I am annoyed with other parents who are "entitled" in school and think that they are more authoritative than the teacher. on the other hand, I also feel annoyed with teachers who don't follow the etiquette of teaching. 
Have a great day.
Aki~

I think that teachers should have reasonable rights and authority for teaching.
>>> CORRECT!

Of course, we must not overlook the abuse and violence to the children.
>>> Of course, we must not overlook the abuse and violence of the children.

When teacher's authority collapse in the class, students do not respect any more in education.
>> When the teacher's authority collapse in the class, students do not respect anymore in education.
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