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If you could buy only one of these two things, would you choose a dishwasher or a washing machine? W

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I'll choose a washing machine without any hesitation.
In my case, I enjoy washing dishes. It makes me calm and relax.
And it is not that annoyed to wash dishes compared with washing clothes.
Washing clothes takes more time than washing dishes.
In addition, If I don't cook or eat anything, I don't need to wash a dish.
But even if I don't want to wash clothes, I should wear clothes.
And then, I have to clean my clothes.

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Good Day, Ian!
I would also choose a washing machine as well over a dishwasher. I agree with you because you live alone, so you don't have a lot of dishes to wash and you can even just eat out to avoid washing dishes. Great job by the way with your sentences.
-T. Caitlyn
I'll choose a washing machine without any hesitation.
>> CORRECT
In my case, I enjoy washing dishes. 
>> CORRECT
It makes me calm and relax.
>> It makes me calm and relaxed.
And it is not that annoyed to wash dishes compared with washing clothes.
>> Washing dishes is not as annoying as washing clothes.
Washing clothes takes more time than washing dishes.
>> CORRECT
In addition, If I don't cook or eat anything, I don't need to wash a dish.
>> CORRECT
But even if I don't want to wash clothes, I should wear clothes.
>> But even if I don't want to wash my clothes, I still need to wear them.
And then, I have to clean my clothes.
>> So I have no choice but to wash my clothes.
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