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Hello, T.Donna.
Did you sleep well last night?
Since I had a enough sleep, now I feel very good.
Meanwhile, there is no patient in the clinic sadly.
I hope there will be more patients this afternoon.
I received a text that showed the cost for movement this morning.
They requested almost double cost than expected.
You know this sentence?
There is nothing to be cheap and be good.
Anyway, we are goining to meet another moving company at lunch time.
At that time, we have another meeting with interior team staff.
Because we don't have enough time to eat a lunch, So I am thinking about our lunch seriously.
No patient in the clinic, no food in my stomach.
Back to the topic, when I was young, I prefered a loud, big celebration.
But, now I like a small celebration.
Only cake, drink, food and my family are just enough to celebrate my birthday.
I think that I am tired of big meeting that consists of many people as I got older.
You might like a big celebration, right?
See you tomorrow.

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Hi there once again, Dr. Kim!

Yes, I got ample sleep last night, thanks for asking. It is good to know you did too. A good night sleep is all we need sometimes to begin a perfect day. Well, you are right, we always pay the price of quality. Quality means expensive so, if we want it, we need to be willing toi pay for it. Best of luck with the next company you will meet,

By this time, you might already be having lunch. Some very good savory soup as well as meat or fish and a nice dessert might do. Today, we are heading off to a restaurant to celebate my birthday. So, I have already made up my mind for the menu. As opposed to what you expect, I like small intimate celebrations as well especially for birthdays. However, for children, the more, the better. Since I have witnessed big and grandiose ones in my life in my job, I like it simple and meaningful.

Anyway, my suggestions to your sentences are minimal. Plase go over them carefully. Thank you for making good use of your time in your clinic by writing this composition. See you soon agan! Have a wonderful afternoon!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

Did you sleep well last night?
>> Correct!

Since I had a enough sleep, now I feel very good.
>> Since I had enough sleep, now I feel very good.

Meanwhile, there is no patient in the clinic sadly.
>> Correct!

I hope there will be more patients this afternoon.
>> Correct!

I received a text that showed the cost for movement this morning.
>> Correct!

They requested almost double cost than expected.
>> Correct!

You know this sentence?
>> Correct!

There is nothing to be cheap and be good.
>> There is nothing cheap that is good. 

Anyway, we are goining to meet another moving company at lunch time.
 >> Correct!

At that time, we have another meeting with interior team staff.
>> At that time, we have another meeting with an interior team staff.

Because we don't have enough time to eat a lunch, So I am thinking about our lunch seriously.
>> Because we don't have enough time to eat a lunch, I am thinking about our lunch seriously.

No patient in the clinic, no food in my stomach.
>> Correct!

Back to the topic, when I was young, I prefered a loud, big celebration.
>> Correct!

But, now I like a small celebration.
>> Correct!

Only cake, drink, food and my family are just enough to celebrate my birthday.
>> Correct!

I think that I am tired of big meeting that consists of many people as I got older.
>> Correct!

You might like a big celebration, right?
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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