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1. My friend always splurges after he gets his paycheck.
2. How much is your salary?
3. Fairness in assessing employee performance is importance.
4. I'll send you a text message.
5. We should follow the regulation in South Korea.

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Amazing, Elic! You've managed to create five lovely sentences. However, the fifth one needed a correction which is an "s". There are multiple regulations in South Korea, so we need to make it in plural form. If you are making an essay and was only talking about a single regulation, this could work. However, this was only an example sentence and you were supposed to express it in general, so you should use the plural form of 'regulation'. Nonetheless, you still did a splendid work here! Congratulations!

- Teacher Raven 

1. My friend always splurges after he gets his paycheck.
>> Correct.
2. How much is your salary?
>> Correct.
3. Fairness in assessing employee performance is importance.
>> Correct.
4. I'll send you a text message.
>> Correct.
5. We should follow the regulation in South Korea.
>> We should follow the regulations in South Korea.
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