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Is going on a study abroad worth it? What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

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2022-12-26 1232

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It depends on what you want to learn abroad—for instance, just learning English skills in a language course in an English-speaking country has more disadvantages than advantages considering the cost-effectiveness of studying abroad because there have already been numerous English-intensive courses in Korea that serve good language courses at a reasonable price. However, there are also many things that are worthwhile studying abroad and that you have to study abroad, such as IT, and high technology. However, thanks to various media, we can be educated at home on the internet. Therefore, if possible, it is wise to study in Korea, or through media. But if what you want to learn were not available, you could think about going abroad to study.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening Sir KYY. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts regarding this topic. 
Teacher Irene
It depends on what you want to learn abroad.
>>> Correct. 

for instance, just learning English skills in a language course in an English-speaking country has more disadvantages than advantages considering the cost-effectiveness of studying abroad because there have already been numerous English-intensive courses in Korea that serve good language courses at a reasonable price. 
>>> For instance, if you just want to gain English skills in a language course in an English-speaking country then there are more disadvantages than advantages to this. One problem is the cost-effectiveness of studying abroad. There are already numerous English-intensive courses in Korea that serve good language courses at a reasonable price. 
However, there are also many things that are worthwhile studying abroad and that you have to study abroad, such as IT, and high technology. 
>>> On the other hand, there are also many things that are worthwhile studying abroad such as IT and other technology-related courses.  
However, thanks to various media, we can be educated at home on the internet. 
>>> However, thanks to various social media internet platforms, we can be conveniently educated at home through the internet. 
Therefore, if possible, it is wise to study in Korea, or through media. 
>>> Therefore, if possible, it is still wiser to study in Korea, or through social media. 
But if what you want to learn were not available, you could think about going abroad to study.
>>> Only if such studies are not available should you consider studying abroad. 
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