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Did you enjoy your trip to Suwon? What is the best thing about it?

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I enjoyed my trip with my girlfriend.
Especially the hotel that I reserved was satisfied in location and service.
Even though most of people had a trouble to park, I just park in my hotel.
The hotel was located in center of that place and it make us so comfortable.
The best thing was service of the hotel. It was christmas eve, so they serve a event wine and some food for free as a event.
I was surprised and my girlfriend was moved as well.

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Hi, Ian!
Happy Monday. Thank you for sharing with me how you spent Christmas. It's nice that you were able to enjoy it with your girlfriend and it's also wonderful that you were able to book a great hotel.
-T. Caitlyn
I enjoyed my trip with my girlfriend.
>> CORRECT
Especially the hotel that I reserved was satisfied in location and service.
>> I was especially satisfied with the location and the services of the hotel that I reserved.
Even though most of people had a trouble to park, I just park in my hotel.
>> Other people had trouble looking for a parking space but for me, I just parked at our hotel.
The hotel was located in center of that place and it make us so comfortable.
>> The hotel was located in the center of that place and it made us so comfortable.
The best thing was service of the hotel. 
>> The best thing was the service of the hotel.
It was christmas eve, so they serve a event wine and some food for free as a event.
>> It was Christmas eve so they served wine and food for free as part of the event.
I was surprised and my girlfriend was moved as well.
>> CORRECT
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