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How is social media changing parent and child relationships?

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It makes good relationships but sometimes it makes bad relationships. Good relationships are social media can provide some information that parent and child didn't knows. But bad relationships are it can make conflict each parent and child because someone spend their a lot of times for social media, they will might be get discord.

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Hi, Daisy. ^_^ 
Thank you for sharing your opinion about this matter. I agree that social media has its pros and cons. 
I think it will be very beneficial if both parents and children will use social media in moderation. 
Anyhow, I hope you're having a great Monday. ^^
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry

It makes good relationships but sometimes it makes bad relationships. 
>> CORRECT!
Good relationships are social media can provide some information that parent and child didn't knows. 
>> In making good relationships, social media can provide some information that parents and children don't know about. 
But bad relationships are it can make conflict each parent and child because someone spend their a lot of times for social media, they will might be get discord.
>> [Do you mean]: But it can also create bad relationships and conflict between parents and children because of the amount of time children spend on social media. Thus, resulting to a discord. 
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