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회원님의 영작문

Hana, Isadora (a.k.a. Isa) , Maddeline (a.k.a. Maddy) , and Jason were the best-friends group. They never got seperated, and they were magically always the same class. This semester, a talent show was opening, and they were doing Teamwork-Play for the talents. They were doing the story for the show. Small Hana was the Wee-Girl, and tall Jason was great at cartwheeling, so he was the giant tumbleweed. The most confident and also funny Maddie was the narrator, and dramatic Isa was good at pretending (acting), so she was the frantic mama. The story goes like this: There was a small girl, and she had only a mother. They were always happy. But then one day, a giant tumbleweed rolled her away. The wee girl slept there for 5 weeks because of all the rocking. She rolled untill she met the warm south wind and blew back to her mama.--- In the show day, those best friend group succeded well and got a stage full of applause. That group is always happy with each other. Wow! Haha^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Heather! Thank you for the time you spend in making your story. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you then. ~ T. Lyn
Hana, Isadora (a.k.a. Isa) , Maddeline (a.k.a. Maddy) , and Jason were the best-friends group.
>>Hana, Isadora (a.k.a Isa), Madeline (a.k.a. Maddy), and Jason were a group of best friends.
They never got seperated, and they were magically always the same class.
>>They never parted and magically were always in the same class.
This semester, a talent show was opening, and they were doing Teamwork-Play for the talents. 
>>A talent show was held this semester, and they were doing teamwork-play.
They were doing the story for the show. 
>>Correct.
Small Hana was the Wee-Girl, and tall Jason was great at cartwheeling, so he was the giant tumbleweed. 
>>Little Hana was Wee-Girl, and tall Jason was a giant tumbleweed who was good at cartwheeling.
The most confident and also funny Maddie was the narrator, and dramatic Isa was good at pretending (acting), so she was the frantic mama. 
>>Maddy, the most confident and the funniest, was the narrator, and Isa was a crazy mother because she was good at acting.
The story goes like this: 
>>Correct.
There was a small girl, and she had only a mother. 
>>There was a little girl an she only had her mother.
They were always happy. 
>>Correct.
But then one day, a giant tumbleweed rolled her away. 
>>Then one day a huge tumbleweed rolled her down.
The wee girl slept there for 5 weeks because of all the rocking. 
>>The Wee-Girl slept there for five weeks because of all the shaking.
She rolled untill she met the warm south wind and blew back to her mama.
>>She rolled until she met a warm south wind and blew it back at her mother.
In the show day, those best friend group succeded well and got a stage full of applause. 
>>On this day's broadcast, this group of best friends succeeded in box office success and presented a stage full of applause.
That group is always happy with each other. 
>>The group is always happy with each other.
Wow! Haha.^^
>>Correct.
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