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I believe that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages, if we use robots in our life. It especially helps a lot for disabled people. Robots can be eyes, legs and hands for human and it can be the brain as well, if development of AI goes well and in the right way. We have learnt that how much benifit we got since numerous electronics invented. We didn't expect that there will be robots which work for food delivery, manufacturing and treating patients few decades ago but it becomes real and many people might feel uncomfortable, if they can't use it. However, there are disadvantages to use it. If factories decide to introduce automatic system, many employees will lose their job. Oppornents claimed that thousands people will push out from their work and there aren't proper positions for them because most people don't have any ideas about other professionals expect their jobs. But proponets explained that new jows will be created such as IT professionals. I think pros overweigh cons

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I believe that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages, if we use robots in our life. 
>>> CORRECT
It especially helps a lot for disabled people.
>>> CORRECT
 Robots can be the eyes, legs and hands for human and it can be the brain as well, if development of AI goes well and in the right way.
>>> CORRECT
We have learnt that how much benefit we got since numerous electronics invented. 
>>> CORRECT
We didn't expect that there will be robots which work for food delivery, manufacturing and treating patients few decades ago but it becomes real and many people might feel uncomfortable, if they can't use it.
>>> CORRECT
 However, there are disadvantages to use it.
>>> CORRECT
 If factories decide to introduce automatic system, many employees will lose their job.
>>> CORRECT
 Opponents claimed that thousands people will push out from their work and there aren't proper positions for them because most people don't have any ideas about other professionals expect their jobs.
>>> CORRECT
 But proponents explained that new jobs will be created such as IT professionals.
>>> CORRECT
 I think pros overweigh cons
>>> I think the pros outweigh the cons. 
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