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I will describe how petty a queen should be.

작성자: 김*율
2022-12-20 1088

회원님의 영작문

A queen should be blonde. A marigold blond. A queen's hair shouth be silky and untangled. A queen's hair should be long and wavy. Long and long untill it reaches the waist. A queen's eyes should be turquoise. The eyes should be shiny, wet but not teary, and warm but not too kind ( a good queen must be at least 2% strict ). A queen's nose must be a little long and sharp, high but not pig-high. A queen's lips must be red like roses, wearing little lipstick, plump and in the same time thin, but not plump like swollen. Her skin must be smooth like glass, but not slippery, clean like paper and has the color of peaches. Her body should be slim, but not like chopsticks, fingers thin as branches but not like needles. feet small in a cute and pretty way, toe/fingernails tidy like graphs. A queen shall wear only earrings and necklaces,and other heavy jewelry is not allowed. A queen should be never so vain. But she shall not be too humble too. That is a so perfect queen. Then farewell, friends. ⚱

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Heather! Thank you for your time and effort in describing what a queen looks like. Let's talk about it more in class. I will see you then. ~T. Lyn
A queen should be blonde.
>>The queen must be blonde.
A marigold blond. 
>>Marigold blonde hair.
A queen's hair shouth be silky and untangled. 
>>The queen's hair should be soft, shiny and untangled.
A queen's hair should be long and wavy. 
>>Correct.
Long and long untill it reaches the waist.
>>It should be very long until it reaches the queen's waist.
 A queen's eyes should be turquoise. 
>>Correct.
The eyes should be shiny, wet but not teary, and warm but not too kind ( a good queen must be at least 2% strict ). 
>>Correct.
A queen's nose must be a little long and sharp, high but not pig-high. 
>>The queen's nose should be slightly longer, sharper, and higher, but not as high as that of pig.
A queen's lips must be red like roses, wearing little lipstick, plump and in the same time thin, but not plump like swollen. 
>>The queen's lips should be red as a rose, wear a little lipstick, and be plump and thin at the same time, but not puffy like a puff.
Her skin must be smooth like glass, but not slippery, clean like paper and has the color of peaches. 
>>Her skin is smooth as glass, but not slippery, clear as paper, and has a peachy tint.
Her body should be slim, but not like chopsticks, fingers thin as branches but not like needles. 
>>Her body should be slim but not like chopsticks, and her fingers should be as thin as branches but not like needles.
feet small in a cute and pretty way, toe/fingernails tidy like graphs. 
>>Cute and pretty little feet, neat toes or fingernails like a graph.
A queen shall wear only earrings and necklaces,and other heavy jewelry is not allowed. 
>>The queen is only required to wear earring and necklaces and no other heavy jewelry allowed.
A queen should be never so vain. 
>>A queen must never be vain.
But she shall not be too humble too. 
>>But she shouldn't be too humble.
That is a so perfect queen. 
>>That would be such a perfect queen.
Then farewell, friends.
>>Correct.
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