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Homework

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회원님의 영작문

1. Tell me something about your first day in university.
: Actually, I cannot remember clearly how was my first day in university because it was 15 years ago already. But, I think I was pretty excited to meet new friends and professors. My university is located in the middle of Seoul and because it was really close to Seoul station, I took a train to go to school.
2. Tell me about your classes. What makes each class unique, and which of them is your favorite? Explain your answer.
: There were theoretical and practical classes and my favorite class was practical class as it wasn't too boring during the class comparing to theoretical classes. And it was quite enjoyable to learn from experience.
3. What were your favorite subjects? Explain to me why?
My major was non-destructive testing which is specialized in engineering. My favorite subject was learning about radiology as I wanted to work in the airport checkpoint for luggage before departure or after arriving at the airport.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Helen, 
Most of your sentences are simple and grammatically correct and it was easy for you to use the right word for your sentence. You may start to improve your grammar by learning the correct structure of sentences. And being familiar with the correct usage of prepositions and articles will help you construct your sentences better. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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1. Tell me something about your first day in university.
>> Tell me something about your first day in university.(CORRECT) 
: Actually, I cannot remember clearly how was my first day in university because it was 15 years ago already. But, I think I was pretty excited to meet new friends and professors. My university is located in the middle of Seoul and because it was really close to Seoul station, I took a train to go to school.
>> Actually, I cannot remember clearly how was my first day in university because it was 15 years ago already. But, I think I was pretty excited to meet new friends and professors. My university is located in the middle of Seoul and because it was really close to Seoul station, I took a train to go to school. (CORRECT) 

2. Tell me about your classes. What makes each class unique, and which of them is your favorite? Explain your answer.
>> Tell me about your classes. What makes each class unique, and which of them is your favorite? Explain your answer.(CORRECT) 
: There were theoretical and practical classes and my favorite class was practical class as it wasn't too boring during the class comparing to theoretical classes. And it was quite enjoyable to learn from experience.
>>There were theoretical and practical classes and my favorite class was practical class as it wasn't too boring during the class compared to theoretical classes. And it was quite enjoyable to learn from the experience. 
3. What were your favorite subjects? Explain to me why?
>> What were your favorite subjects? Explain to me why? (CORRECT)
My major was non-destructive testing which is specialized in engineering. My favorite subject was learning about radiology as I wanted to work in the airport checkpoint for luggage before departure or after arriving at the airport.
>> My major was non-destructive testing which specialized in engineering. My favorite subject was learning about radiology as I wanted to work in the airport checkpoint for luggage before departure or after arriving at the airport.

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1. Tell me something about your first day in university.
: Actually, I cannot remember clearly how was my first day in university because it was 15 years ago already. But, I think I was pretty excited to meet new friends and professors. My university is located in the middle of Seoul and because it was really close to Seoul station, I took a train to go to school.
2. Tell me about your classes. What makes each class unique, and which of them is your favorite? Explain your answer.
: There were theoretical and practical classes and my favorite class was practical class as it wasn't too boring during the class comparing to theoretical classes. And it was quite enjoyable to learn from experience.
3. What were your favorite subjects? Explain to me why?
My major was non-destructive testing which is specialized in engineering. My favorite subject was learning about radiology as I wanted to work in the airport checkpoint for luggage before departure or after arriving at the airport.
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