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Can you tell me about something you regret?

작성자: 전*채
2022-12-19 1080

회원님의 영작문

Yes! I want to talk to you one episode about my university life.
It's about my dream and passion.
My university major is 'Film making'. My dream was movie director so I go that major.
Actually the entrance examination was so diffiscult that I was study movies harder than math.
And finally I enter the movie art university.
I always looking foward to making movies on myself of directer.
But, it was different from what I thought.
There were so many genius and they had immovable comfidence and impressive communication skills.
I was lose my confidence immediately.
So I didn't make a movie even though I had a chance.
I graduated as a producer, not a directer.
After graduated, It is harder to make a movie than when I was a student.
It was almost impossible.
That is my regret thing, so always have a craving for it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Aww, I appreciate you sharing your regret with me, Chae. I understand that being surrounded by people who seem to do better than us can really bring our self-esteem down. :( Sending virtual hugs!! <3 However, I believe that things happen for a reason, and there are much better things waiting for you. ^_^ Fighting, Chae! 
~T.Harmony <3

Yes! I want to talk to you one episode about my university life.
>> Yes! I want to share with you a moment that happened during my time in the university.
It's about my dream and passion.
>> CORRECT!
My university major is 'Film making'. 
>> CORRECT!
My dream was movie director so I go that major.
>> My dream was to become a movie director someday, so I chose that major.
Actually the entrance examination was so diffiscult that I was study movies harder than math.
>> To be honest, the entrance examination was so difficult that I was studying movies a lot harder than math.
And finally I enter the movie art university.
>> I was finally accepted into a movie and art university.
I always looking foward to making movies on myself of directer.
>> I always looked forward to making movies about myself as a director.
But, it was different from what I thought.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> However, it was far from what I expected it to be.
There were so many genius and they had immovable comfidence and impressive communication skills.
>> A lot of them were geniuses, had immovable confidence, and impressive communication skills.
I was lose my confidence immediately.
>> I instantly lost confidence in myself.
OR>> I felt inferior.
OR>> My self-esteem sunk.
So I didn't make a movie even though I had a chance.
>> Despite the opportunity to make a movie, I never did it.
I graduated as a producer, not a directer.
>> CORRECT! (Just change the spelling of "directer" to "director" ^^)
After graduated, It is harder to make a movie than when I was a student.
>> After graduation, it was a lot harder to make a movie compared to when I was a student.
It was almost impossible.
>> CORRECT!
That is my regret thing, so always have a craving for it.
>> That is my regret in life, so I always have a desire to do it.
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