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Hello, T. Donna.
What about your condition?
I had a hectic day, as you could guess.
Every Monday and Saturday, there are many clients in the clinic.
While there is no weekday's paperwork on Saturday, there are many kinds of works on Monday.
Thus, I am sometimes afraid of Monday.
Anyway, there are many clients today.
In addition, I visited our new building at lunch time.
Fortunately, there's been a progress on the interior construction and the fixation of building's defects.
However, I was mad, because the building construction company requested money for the defect only to me.
Hence, I denied signing some consent for their benefit.
After lunch time, there are more clients.
Usually, our clinic close 7:30 PM, but my final lifting treatment ended at 8:30 today.
I worked until 10:00 PM, because of paperwork.
For my homework, I actually don't know many countries.
However, I am sure that Korea isn't the best place.
How about you?
I am so tired, so I should go to sleep now.
See you.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good afternoon, Dr. Kim!

Mondays can really be challenging but I am happy to hear about your work force since no one said goddbye this time. Well, this season is going to be very busy since young people want to meet their friends, hence, they need to look beautiful. Anyway, you have overcome your Monday phobia and that is  great!

I am sure that you can fix the problem with your building construction. It needs to be a two-way process. They have to listen to you and vice-versa. Soon, this building is going to be yours to use. May it be top class and cutting edge.

Meanwhile, in any country, there is always a spot for a beautiful environment and thick , rich forests. We still have a lot left in our country. In my city alone, there are still some pine trees left. Someday, they may all be gone. So, we have to preserve what is left. In your country, your government have marked forested areas as non- construction sites. Perhaps other countries should follow you footsteps to mark forests as non- industrial places. 

My suggestions were indicated below and underscored for yout to notice quicly. Study them very well. Great job on your homework!

I am beat now as well. Let me catch some sleep and see you again soon!

Have a very good noon!

-T. Donna~ 

Hello, T. Donna.
>> Correct!

What about your condition?
>> Correct!

I had a hectic day, as you could guess.
>> Correct!

Every Monday and Saturday, there are many clients in the clinic.
>> Correct!

While there is no weekday's paperwork on Saturday, there are many kinds of works on Monday.
>> Correct!

Thus, I am sometimes afraid of Monday.
>> Correct!

Anyway, there are many clients today.
>> Correct!

In addition, I visited our new building at lunch time.
>> Correct!

Fortunately, there's been a progress on the interior construction and the fixation of building's defects.
>> Fortunately, there's been a progress on the interior construction and the repair of building's defects.

However, I was mad, because the building construction company requested money for the defect only to me.
>> However, I was mad because the building construction company requested money for the defect only from me.

Hence, I denied signing some consent for their benefit.
>> Correct!

After lunch time, there are more clients.
>> Correct!

Usually, our clinic close 7:30 PM, but my final lifting treatment ended at 8:30 today.
>> Usually, our clinic closes at 7:30 PM, but my final lifting treatment ended at 8:30 today.

I worked until 10:00 PM, because of paperwork.
>> I worked until 10:00 PM, because of paperworks.

For my homework, I actually don't know many countries.
>> Correct!

However, I am sure that Korea isn't the best place.
>> Correct!

How about you?
>> Correct!

I am so tired, so I should go to sleep now.
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!

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