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You do know Daha right? Well, he and I are more familiar whith each other nowdays. And Christmas is getting closer. Daha promised to give me a Christmas present to me. Do you know what I said? I said THIS exactly to Daha ; "If you're promising, I'm gauranteeing. Ha! How 'bout that?" And we giggled and chuckeld. Then I thought what Daha wears these days. He wears a mini military waist bag. He uses that as a portable pencil case, but he does like any military stuff too........ so I thought about giving Daha a military-pattern pencil & eraser set. Ooh, he'll like it. I know he loves all those military stuff. Then I remembered. My Pa bought a military-pattern pair of socks, mistaking the children's 230 size for adult's 230 size. What a coinsidence! Daha wears child's 230, and that pair of socks are still new : my dad never wore it. Luckily, I had some military-pattern gift-wrap, and wrapped the gifts inside. Ooh, I'm 100% sure Daha will present me clip-on earrings and other two jewelry. ❣❣

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Hello Heather, good day to you. Wow! It's great to give gifts to others. They say, it is better to give than to receive. We will talk about it in class, see you! ~T. Lyn
You do know Daha right? 
>>You know Daha, right?
Well, he and I are more familiar whith each other nowdays. 
>>Well, he and I are more familiar with each other these days.
And Christmas is getting closer. 
>>Correct.
Daha promised to give me a Christmas present to me. 
>>Daha promised to give me a Christmas present.
Do you know what I said? 
>>Correct.
I said THIS exactly to Daha ; "If you're promising, I'm gauranteeing. 
>>I told Daha exactly this, "If you promise, I guarantee."
Ha! How 'bout that?" 
>>Ha! "How about that?"
And we giggled and chuckeld. 
>>And we giggled and chuckled. 
Then I thought what Daha wears these days.
>>Then I thought about what Daha is wearing these days.
He wears a mini military waist bag. 
>>Correct.
He uses that as a portable pencil case, but he does like any military stuff too........ 
>>He uses it as a portable pencil case, and he likes any military stuffs.
so I thought about giving Daha a military-pattern pencil & eraser set.
>>So, I though of giving Daha a set of military-patterned pencils and erasers.
 Ooh, he'll like it. 
>>Correct.
I know he loves all those military stuff. 
>>Correct.
Then I remembered.
>>Correct.
My Pa bought a military-pattern pair of socks, mistaking the children's 230 size for adult's 230 size. 
>>My dad mistook a child's size of 230 for an adult size 230 and bought military pattern socks.
What a coinsidence! 
>>What a coincidence!
Daha wears child's 230, and that pair of socks are still new : my dad never wore it. 
>>Daha wear children's 230 and the socks are still new, but my dad has not worn them.
Luckily, I had some military-pattern gift-wrap, and wrapped the gifts inside. 
>>Luckily, I had military pattern gift wrapper and I wrapped my present in it.
Ooh, I'm 100% sure Daha will present me clip-on earrings and other two jewelry.
>>Ooh, I'm 100% sure Daha will gift me clip-on earring and two other pieces of jewelry.
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