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1. What an importance thing do you think?
2. Who do you like the relevant people with you?
3. The foundation is reputed to have very deep pockets.
4. The terrors of the night were past.
5. In South Korea culture, families usually hold a memorial service for ancestors on holidays.

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Good effort, Elic. These sentences were very nice. However, there were some sentences which I placed some alternatives on. Please review the placement of words and how I created the pattern of each sentences. Make sure to take note of them. Have a great day ahead!

- Teacher Raven 

1. What an importance thing do you think?
>> What important thing do you think about?
2. Who do you like the relevant people with you?
>> Who are the relevant people in your life?
3. The foundation is reputed to have very deep pockets.
>> Correct.
4. The terrors of the night were past.
>> The terrors of the night were in the past.
5. In South Korea culture, families usually hold a memorial service for ancestors on holidays.
>> In South Korean culture, families usually hold a memorial service for their ancestors on holidays.
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