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작성자: 박*민
2022-12-16 754

회원님의 영작문

1. My dream destination is Maldives. People around me who went there inspired me to definitely go there for a honey moon. Because of pandemic situation, I couldn't go on a oversea travel on my honeymoon vacation. So I would like to enjoy some time with my husband and my daughter there one day.

2. My worst travel experience was when I went to business trip to Germany with my boss. We planned to visit Switzerland during our spare time on the weekend. We have rent a diesel car and while driving on the highway we couldn't find the gas station. So the car stopped on the road because it ran out of the gas. Finally we found it but we needed to push the car to reach the gas station. It was horrible.

3. I normally like to watch movies and drama series by Nexflix because I have no time to see during on weekdays. I go through with all I wanted to watch and which is popular nowadays. So that I can communicate with people and join what are they talking about or to sympathize with them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Helen, 
I suggest always incorporating the proper stress and intonation when speaking to add variation to your delivery when speaking. Pay attention to how words are used and sentences are structured. And you must learn the best way to communicate so you can express yourself in the best way possible.  Keep improving your communication skills. ~ Teacher QUENNY


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1. My dream destination is Maldives. People around me who went there inspired me to definitely go there for a honey moon. Because of pandemic situation, I couldn't go on a oversea travel on my honeymoon vacation. So I would like to enjoy some time with my husband and my daughter there one day.
>> My dream destination is the Maldives. People around me who went there inspired me to definitely go there for a honeymoon. But because of the pandemic situation, I couldn't go on overseas travel for my honeymoon vacation. So I would like to travel to the Maldives and enjoy some time with my husband and my daughter there one day.

2. My worst travel experience was when I went to business trip to Germany with my boss. We planned to visit Switzerland during our spare time on the weekend. We have rent a diesel car and while driving on the highway we couldn't find the gas station. So the car stopped on the road because it ran out of the gas. Finally we found it but we needed to push the car to reach the gas station. It was horrible.
>> My worst travel experience was when I went on a business trip to Germany with my boss. We planned to visit Switzerland during our spare time on the weekend. We rented a diesel car and while driving on the highway we couldn't find a gas station. So the car stopped on the road because it ran out of gas. Finally, we found one but we needed to push the car to reach the gas station. It was a horrible experience. 

3. I normally like to watch movies and drama series by Nexflix because I have no time to see during on weekdays. I go through with all I wanted to watch and which is popular nowadays. So that I can communicate with people and join what are they talking about or to sympathize with them.
>>I normally like to watch movies and drama series on NetFlix because I have no time to watch on weekdays. I go through with all I wanted to watch and which is popular nowadays. So that I can communicate with people and join what are they talking about or sympathize with them when discussing the latest movies and drama series nowadays. 
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1. My dream destination is Maldives. People around me who went there inspired me to definitely go there for a honey moon. Because of pandemic situation, I couldn't go on a oversea travel on my honeymoon vacation. So I would like to enjoy some time with my husband and my daughter there one day.

2. My worst travel experience was when I went to business trip to Germany with my boss. We planned to visit Switzerland during our spare time on the weekend. We have rent a diesel car and while driving on the highway we couldn't find the gas station. So the car stopped on the road because it ran out of the gas. Finally we found it but we needed to push the car to reach the gas station. It was horrible.

3. I normally like to watch movies and drama series by Nexflix because I have no time to see during on weekdays. I go through with all I wanted to watch and which is popular nowadays. So that I can communicate with people and join what are they talking about or to sympathize with them.
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