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What is the Spirit of Christmas?

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Christmas is the day Jesus was born. At first, it seems that only those who believe in Jesus took care of Christmas. But these days, almost everyone celebrates Christmas. Also, there are many people who receive gifts and eat dinner together. Also, there are many people who go to the cathedral and spend time with their families.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

Christmas is the day Jesus was born. 
>>> CORRECT!

At first, it seems that only those who believe in Jesus took care of Christmas. 
>>> CORRECT!

But these days, almost everyone celebrates Christmas. 
>>> CORRECT!

Also, there are many people who receive gifts and eat dinner together. 
>>> CORRECT!

Also, there are many people who go to the cathedral and spend time with their families.
>>> CORRECT!
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