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Hi guys! My name is Hana and I usually tell you my story about my mean big sister, Isa. (Isadora is the name, but her friends call her Isa ^^.) However, today, I'll tell you a story about my ' not-having-a-crush-on-each-other-just-like-to-hang out-together ' boyfriend Daha. Daha's cute, has dimples, and he has neat, but curly hair just like me. Very well, Daha has an 8 years older brother and he taught him to count well when Daha was THREE. He learned it well at an apt age, and his kind brother was fond of him. He understood the basic treble figures when he was 6. Then, now, I can only count to Tredecillion, Daha can count to One Hundred Quintillion!!! I want to have Daha's brother instead of my mean sister. ¤Ð¤Ð

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Hello Heather, thank you for sending me your composition. Thank you also for introducing me to your friends. We will talk about them in class. I'll see you in class. Stay warm! ~ T. Lyn
I explain my name & sister all the time because there is always someone who reads my book series for the first time.
>>I always explain my name and my sister because there are always first-time readers of my book series.
Hi guys! 
>>Correct.
My name is Hana and I usually tell you my story about my mean big sister, Isa. 
>>My name is Hana and I usually tell my story about my mean sister, Isa.
(Isadora is the name, but her friends call her Isa ^^.) 
>>(My name is Isado, but my friends call me "Isa."
However, today, I'll tell you a story about my ' not-having-a-crush-on-each-other-just-like-to-hang out-together ' boyfriend Daha. 
>>But today, I would like to tell you the story of my boyfriend, Daha, who doesn't have a crust on each other, just wants to hang out with.
Daha's cute, has dimples, and he has neat, but curly hair just like me. 
>>Daha is cute, has dimples, is neat, but has the same curly hair as me.
Very well, Daha has an 8 years older brother and he taught him to count well when Daha was THREE. 
>>Well, Daha has an 8-year-old brother who taught him to count when Daha was 3 years old.
He learned it well at an apt age, and his kind brother was fond of him. 
>>He learned it well in due time and his kind brother liked him.
He understood the basic treble figures when he was 6. 
>>He understood the basic triple number at the age of six.
Then, now, I can only count to Tredecillion, Daha can count to One Hundred Quintillion!!! 
>>Then now, I can only count up to tredecillion, and I can count up to a hundred quintillions. 
I want to have Daha's brother instead of my mean sister. 
>>I want Daha's older brother instead of my mean older sister.
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