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What is a white lie? Have you ever experienced telling a white lie?

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Absolutely yes, there are a kind of the white lies in my country. Like you look so good, it seems like you lose weight and good morning. the reason why I did tell an white lie is to make a good relationship. Also, getting along with other people is important in my country.

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Thank you for doing your best in this homework, Elic. You managed to create sentences with complete thoughts and ideas. I have placed some corrections on items 1,2, and 3 where I added some words to complete the sentences' meanings. Remember that if you are going to write a line or quotation that someone said, make sure to put quotation marks ("") to indicate that someone said these things. Other than that, you did an amazing job!

- Teacher Raven :)


Absolutely yes, there are a kind of the white lies in my country.
>> Absolutely! There are many kinds of white lies people tell in my country.
Like you look so good, it seems like you lose weight and good morning.
>> Like "You look so good!", "It seems like you lost some weight!", or "Good morning!"
the reason why I did tell an white lie is to make a good relationship.
>> The reason why I told white lies is to make good relationships with other people.
Also, getting along with other people is important in my country.
>> Correct.
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