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Your question is very sad but true.

Capitalism make us seperated the rich and the poor motr and more.

I guess that wealth gap get worse than previous.

So some developed counties try to make policies to reduce for the wealth gap.

Such as Korea and China pursue as the best goal for economic development.

Corrpt and dictator contries also get worse between the rich and the poor.

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Hi Ms. Lily!
I guess that is a global issue. just like what you have mentioned that wealth is circulating within the family. To be honest, I don't have any idea how the wealth gap can be reduced, but what I know is, someone needs to work hard and smart to augment the level of their lives.
Talk to you later :)
Aki

Your question is very sad but true.
>>> CORRECT

Capitalism make us seperated the rich and the poor motr and more.
>>> Capitalism makes us separate the rich and the poor more and more.

I guess that wealth gap get worse than previous.
>>> I guess that the wealth gap gets worse than previous.

So some developed counties try to make policies to reduce for the wealth gap.
>>>  So some developed counties try to make policies to reduce the wealth gap

Such as Korea and China pursue as the best goal for economic development.
>>> Such as Korea and China pursue the best goal for economic development.

Corrpt and dictator contries also get worse between the rich and the poor.
>>> Corrupt and dictator countries also get worse between the rich and the poor.
>>> Countries with corrupt and dictator leaders have worse gap between the rich and the poor.


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