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Hello, T.Donna.
I am on my way to the airport.
As you guess, I am so sad to leave here.
Yesterday, we had a blast.
As other days, we did a snorkeling, swimming, sand playing, and riding waterslides.
Because Megan¡¯s wound healed almost, we all could play everything together.
This hotel has an amazing snorkeling area and fantastic water slides, as I said.
After the last class, I told my wife about your suggestion; we could have saved money if we traveled Cebu.
She disagreed with that, and showed me some expensive hotels in Cebu with her cell phone.
There were many economic hotels there, though.
Anyway, excepting money, I was totally satisfied with this vacation.
My family seemed to be so happy through all the time.
Although I had a somewhat discomfort feeling, I also enjoyed this vacation, so I think this memory will give me the powerful energy.
I will miss Hawaii for a long time.
Now,11hours flight is waiting for us.
It¡¯s too bad.
Have a nice day.
See you this Friday.

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Good day, Dr. Kim!

By now, you have reached South Korea. The falling snow from the sky greets you and you have to all be bundles up, the opposite of the Hawaiian season. Nevertheless, it was a great decision to take a break from you very serious and routinary life. Of course, dealing with work and the daily grind makes our vacation worthwhile. We need stress to learn to relax.

There are many destinations to visit in the future. Maybe, many people in your country have heard of others' vacation and think that it is good to be there too. Well, they are right. Any place is great when we are with our family.

Now that you back in your country, always remember how beautiful it is in Hawaii and how you can use this to inspire yourself.

Thank you for this excellent homework. The grammar suggestions were already underlined for your convenience. Kindly go over them very well.

See you soon in South Korea!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

I am on my way to the airport.
>> Correct!

As you guess, I am so sad to leave here.
>> Correct!

Yesterday, we had a blast.
>> Correct!

As other days, we did a snorkeling, swimming, sand playing, and riding waterslides.
>> Correct!

Because Megan¡¯s wound healed almost, we all could play everything together.
>> Correct!

This hotel has an amazing snorkeling area and fantastic water slides, as I said.
>> Correct!

After the last class, I told my wife about your suggestion; we could have saved money if we traveled Cebu.
>> Correct!

She disagreed with that, and showed me some expensive hotels in Cebu with her cell phone.
>> Correct!

There were many economic hotels there, though.
>> There were many economical hotels there, though.

Anyway, excepting money, I was totally satisfied with this vacation.
>> Correct!

My family seemed to be so happy through all the time.
>> Correct!

Although I had a somewhat discomfort feeling, I also enjoyed this vacation, so I think this memory will give me the powerful energy.
>> Although I had a somewhat uncomfortable feeling, I also enjoyed this vacation, so I think this memory will give me a powerful energy.

I will miss Hawaii for a long time.
>> Correct!

Now,11hours flight is waiting for us.
>> Now, our 11- hour flight is waiting for us.

It¡¯s too bad.
>> Correct!

Have a nice day.
>> Correct!

See you this Friday.
>> Correct!
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