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Baking is more fun. Because baking can challenge many things. Baking is more difficult. Because baking needs to prepare many things. Also, it is because you have to pay attention to baking and use it for dough. Of course, it's important to measure.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Baking is more fun. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because baking can challenge many things. 
>>> CORRECT!

Baking is more difficult. Because baking needs to prepare many things. 
>>> CORRECT!

Also, it is because you have to pay attention to baking and use it for dough. 
>>> CORRECT!

Of course, it's important to measure.
>>> CORRECT!
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