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How can South Korea achieve its long-sought goal of a free and unified Korea?

작성자: 황*하
2022-12-14 1093

회원님의 영작문

Korea is located in the middle of powerful countries sucsh as Russia in nothern part, China in western part and Japan in southern part of Korea. I believe that the most important thing is having a same goal between south and north Korea. There will be a lot of problem happened due to the economic reason and political issues. We have lived under the different social structure so it would be impossible to understand what they believe, persue and think each other. Although, we are single race, our beliefs will be totally different due to the political system. However, there are still many people who lost their family members during the Korean War. They always miss their family and have home sick. That is one of the reason why Korea have to be unfied. The countries which surround my country don't want our country to be one country because they don't want us to be rich and have power with enough natural resources. Our long term policy for reuninted has changed depending on the president.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Korea is located in the middle of powerful countries sucsh as Russia in nothern part, China in western part and Japan in southern part of Korea. 
>> Korea is located at the middle of powerful countries such as Russia in the northern part, China at the western part, and Japan at the southern part of Korea. 
I believe that the most important thing is having a same goal between south and north Korea. 
>> I believe that the most important thing is having the same goal between South and North Korea. 
There will be a lot of problem happened due to the economic reason and political issues. 
>> There  were a lot of problems that happened due to economic reasons and political issues. 
We have lived under the different social structure so it would be impossible to understand what they believe, persue and think each other. 
>> We have lived under the different social structure so it would be impossible to understand what they believe, pursue, and think of each other. 
Although, we are single race, our beliefs will be totally different due to the political system. 
>> CORRECT! 
However, there are still many people who lost their family members during the Korean War. 
>> CORRECT! 
They always miss their family and have home sick. 
>> They always miss their family and have home sickness. 
That is one of the reason why Korea have to be unfied. 
>> That is one of the reasons why Korea has to be unified. 
The countries which surround my country don't want our country to be one country because they don't want us to be rich and have power with enough natural resources. 
>> The countries which surround my country don't want our country to be one because they don't want us to be rich and have power with enough natural resources. 
Our long term policy for reuninted has changed depending on the president.
>> Our long term policy for being reunited has changed depending on the president.


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