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If someone who speaks a secret and tells me not to disclose it or it can bring a huge impact to people, i will cherish a secret. If this is not the case, i ofthen share it.

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Good day, Judy!

There is a thin line between a top secret to an ordinary secret sometimes. So, we need to weigh in the consequences of divulging secrets. To be safe, let's keep things to ourselves to be sure. 

Anyway, please observe the suggestions below and apply them on your next homework answer. Great job!

See you soon!

-T. Donna~

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